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How to Write an Amazing Email Subject Line to Grab Prospects

Get prospects to open your marketing emails by grabbing their attention in their inbox. Email marketing is an important part of any community’s strategy. But once you’ve identified your different audience segments, outlined the content for each email, and started to build them out in your email platform, there’s probably one thing that you’re missing: an eye-catching email subject line. 

The email subject line is one of the most important parts of your apartment email marketing efforts. While it may seem like just a small detail, it holds a lot of power. The subject line determines whether or not anyone opens the email in the first place, so it’s vital to draw your audience in from the first second they see the notification that there’s an unread message in their inbox.

Learn how to write an effective email subject line that will help increase your open rates and capture your audience’s attention.

Easy Steps to Writing an Email Subject Line

Though email subject lines can be daunting, they’re simple, straightforward, and even fun to write once you learn the easy-to-follow process.

1. EMAIL PURPOSE

Before you start drafting subject lines, you need to first determine what the overall objective is of the email. That way, you can craft a compelling subject line that not only piques a prospect’s interest but also accurately reflects what’s in the body of an email. 

Be sure to avoid generic subject lines that don’t hint at what’s inside. Doing so can turn recipients off or lower your open rate. If they don’t know what the email is about at a glance, they’re much less likely to open it and much more likely to unsubscribe.

2. CALL TO ACTION

Outlining your call to action up front is pivotal to increasing your conversion rates. For example, if you want prospective residents to schedule a tour, consider adding that language in the subject line. Alternatively, if you’re running a leasing promotion and you want them to sign a lease to secure the deal, add that to the email. These are two very different objectives, so it’s vital to differentiate the language you use in both the subject line and the body of the email, so they always know what you want them to do next. 

3. A/B TEST OPTIONS

More often than not, the first subject line you write won’t be the winner. Draft multiple options and review them objectively to choose the best option. It’s also best to A/B test at least two different subject lines to see which performs better with your target audience. 

4. REVIEW RESULTS

A day or two after the email has been sent, take a look at the metrics. Evaluate the open rate, click-through rates, and other data to determine whether or not the email was a success. If you A/B tested subject lines, you’ll also quickly see which performed better, which can give you insights into what type of language resonates with your audience. 

Ways to Improve Your Subject Line & Increase Your Open Rate

Adding certain language to your email subject lines can tempt your audience into action. There are three things in particular that are proven to increase conversations and get your message noticed in any inbox.

URGENCY

Creating a sense of urgency is vital in getting people to open your email. As of 2019, over 293 billion emails were sent each day. Standing out is half the battle to get them to click. Consider leveraging these words and phrases to make your message seem time-sensitive:

  • Don’t wait
  • Last chance
  • Hurry
  • Ending soon
  • Can’t miss
  • Almost gone
  • Limited time
  • One day only

Using this type of language can help to increase the likelihood that your email will be read.

INCENTIVES

Promoting ongoing promotions, offers, and leasing incentives is not only good for business but good for open rates, too. Including discounts like rent concessions or referral bonuses showcase the benefit for the email recipient. If they immediately know what’s in it for them, there’s a higher chance they’re likely to want to learn more. Consider adding phrases like:

  • 50% off
  • One month free
  • Referral bonus
  • No fee

Saving and making money are major motivators for everyone—and especially for apartment hunters!—so it’s an easy and practical way to entice prospects to take the next step. 

PERSONALIZATION

Adding your prospect’s name to your subject line is an easy way to up your open rates. 26% of readers are more likely to open emails when they see personalization, so it’s a fast and easy way to boost your performance. But you can also think beyond just using their name. If you know their age, their location, or even their apartment preference (like a one or two-bedroom or a ground-floor or top-floor unit), you can incorporate some of this data into your subject lines for a tailored message. Just be sure you have a clean data set so that your subject line is clear.

Email Subject Line Best Practices

Keep these best practices in mind when writing your email subject line to see the best performance possible.

The Shorter the Better 

When it comes to email subject lines, short and sweet is the name of the game. 46% of emails are read on mobile, so use fewer than 50 characters so it all displays on a mobile screen. Research shows that 41-character-long subject lines are the highest-performing, so try to keep it around there to maximize your results.  

Segment Your Audiences

Sending relevant content to your audience is a must to have top-performing open rates. Instead of blasting out the same message to every group, consider segmenting your audience so you can tailor your subject line even further. For example, if you have a group of prospects that you know are empty-nesters, speak to their specific wants and needs. Alternately, if you know they’re single young professionals, use different languages to appeal to this different demographic. Even if your overall email has the same message and call to action, adjusting the subject line can go a long way in driving interest.

Don’t Forget Preview Text

The subject line doesn’t live in a vacuum. Don’t forget to also write preview text to partner with the subject line and provide a little bit more information. Like subject lines, preview text gets cut off on mobile, so just be sure to keep it clear and concise.

 

If you need help with your email copywriting or overarching multifamily marketing strategy, we’re here to help. At zipcode creative, we’re seasoned experts in developing 360-degree strategies that help communities lease up faster, keep residents happier, and make a positive impact on your bottom line. Get in touch today to learn more! 

555 Ross Image is ©Fairfield Residential  |  Work executed by Stacey Feeney, owner of zipcode creative, while under creative direction and employment at Fairfield Residential.

Professional Photography is an Extension of Your Apartment Brand

Professional photography can help residents picture themselves in your community. Well past our childhood filled with picture books, we adults still tend to gravitate toward imagery—especially photography. Though it takes some time (and some money) professional photography can boost your brand and make your marketing materials shine. Read on for reasons to invest in professional photography for your apartment community’s brand:

Photos Tell A Narrative

Anyone can tell you: pictures are worth a thousand words. And when you’re looking to tell a story, make sure you’re in control of the narrative. You can do this by knowing who your desired resident is, and telling the story they want to hear. For example, address any questions or problems they may have with apartment communities by taking photos to show the solutions. Show off the clean pool area, ideal for relaxing and cooling off during hot summer days. Show off the open concept living/dining, perfect for hosting their friends or family. Highlight the beautiful chef-grade kitchen for all the soup makers and sourdough bakers out there.

PRO-TIP
Find the story you want to tell, and work with your professional photographer to tell that story. Show them your mission, vision, and values along with your brand style guide or sheet so they can grasp your goals quickly and easily, and it will be translated across every piece of your brand through the photos they deliver.

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Photography That Fits Your Brand

When it comes to selecting a photographer, ensure they have a style that can work with your brand. Dark and moody photos won’t work with your light and bright brand. Likewise, airy and modern photos may not work for your traditional and luxurious brand. Your brand is so much more than just a logo and color palette, it’s your photos and event flyers and everything in between that has your name associated with it. 

Before you hire a photographer, prepare a “shot list” so that expectations can be set and easily met.  Decide whether you want models to appear in the photos for a more lifestyle use-of-the-space approach, or make it purely architectural to emphasize the features and amenities. Think about the details when planning the day of the photoshoot: Would it be on-brand to arrange a vase of fresh flowers on the clubhouse kitchen island or stage a throw blanket on the unit couch that matches your brand colors?  

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Good Photography Is Worth the Investment

YOU GET WHAT YOU PAY FOR
It’s common in the apartment marketing business to hire real estate photographers. At first glance, it seems like a win-win, because they’re cheap and fast. But you get what you pay for. Find someone who will take the time to understand your brand, and capture it right. Real estate photography is meant for single-family homes to go on the market, attract buyers, and sell quickly. It’s a short shelf-life, which means the quality and longevity simply won’t be there.

SHOOT FOR STAYING POWER
Professional photography for your multifamily community can remain relevant for 5-10 years, if it’s done right (at least until the next remodel). This means you can use it all over the place in your marketing: online (websites and social media) and in-hand (flyers, brochures, postcards). Booking a professional is worth the investment, especially if you can hire a professional architectural photographer. The final product of your investment (beautiful photos) should be something you’re proud to show off to your current and prospective residents.

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Apartment Promo Items: How to Increase Brand Awareness

Instead of the overused t-shirts and pens, think outside the box to create swag people really want.

We all probably have a million branded t-shirts and pencils lying around. The reason? It’s an easy, affordable, and fast way to get company branding out there. But when it comes to creating apartment promo items for your community, there’s an amazing opportunity to think outside the box. Instead of just adding another coffee mug to your residents’ cabinets, why not give them something they want to use?

Swag isn’t just a nice-to-have for your residents. It’s also an amazing way to generate additional interest in what you have to offer. If your residents use the branded products throughout the neighboring areas, they’re publicizing your community in a free and subtle way, helping you amp up your word-of-mouth marketing and encouraging prospective residents to want to learn more. 

If you’re struggling to come up with compelling options for your move-in kit or to distribute at upcoming resident events, read on for some fresh ideas that will get your residents excited.

Keychains

When it comes to apartment promo items, the best items are usually the most practical. Create a luxurious keychain that you can give to residents when they move in. That way, they have a stylish way to consolidate all of their new keys, and it’s also an amazing way for them to unintentionally spread the word about your community. Whether they’re running errands with their keys or lend them to a friend to house-sit, that keychain is a visible accessory that will get a lot of eyes. As a result, it’s an easy and low-effort way to spread brand awareness and drive interest in your community.

Instead of overused plastic fobs or basic plastic keychains, consider a high-end leather keychain that is both durable and stylish. You can emboss the keychain with your logo or community name, creating a timeless design that’s both durable and distinctive, making it something that your new residents will be excited to use.

Reusable Tote Bags

Tote bags are a practical and eco-friendly way to generate interest in your community. Add these practical products to your resident welcome kit to give them an easy way to transport groceries or run errands. Opt for a cloth or canvas design that is extra durable to ensure it can withstand a lot of wear and tear, so your residents can use it for years to come, so when they’re running around town, they’ll be inadvertently advertising your community in the process.

When designing your tote, just be sure to opt for a modern approach that will get residents excited. Use your logo and brand colors tastefully and minimally to make it a design that’s equally stylish and practical. Consider creating an embroidered option over a screen-printed alternative for a design that feels higher-end. 

Portable Speakers

If your community has a pool, nearby park, or sprawling outdoor area, a portable speaker is an amazing way to encourage residents to make use of the space. When the sun is shining and the weather is beautiful, picnics, outdoor dinners, or casual games of frisbee or pickup soccer are more enjoyable when they’re set to music! If your residents have a high-quality and personalized portable speaker handy, they’re likely to take advantage and use it every chance they get.

Just be sure to choose a design that’s durable enough to withstand frequent use, and add a decal for some subtle branding. You can even opt for a tonal, monochromatic look that blends in even more for a sophisticated approach to swag.

Water Bottles

There’s one thing that everyone can always use: a water bottle. This eco-friendly option is perfect if your community has a gym, making it an even more practical gift when residents move in. But the best part? They’re likely to use it beyond just your community, too. Whether they’re running on nearby trails, having a picnic in a nearby park, or simply want to stay hydrated when they’re out and about, a water bottle is an easy way to generate some buzz about your brand throughout the neighborhood and refer new residents. 

Customized Yeti or Swell water bottles are an amazing option that will keep water cold for hours, making it a design that your residents will turn to over and over. Though they’re on the more expensive side, LARQ water bottles are a premium alternative that guarantees clean drinking water for more tech-savvy and style-conscious residents. 

Towels

If you have a pool or a gym, personalized towels are a practical apartment promo item that your residents will love. Whether they drape it over their beach chair, use it to keep sweat at bay during a tough workout, or pack it in their bag for a beach day, it’s an item that they’ll turn to again and again.

When crafting your design, opt for something that’s not too over-the-top. Incorporate your brand colors and logos in subtle ways so residents will be more inclined to use the towels because they love the design. Consider a classic striped design with a subtle hint of embroidery for a more timeless look. 

 

Umbrellas

If you live in a rainy climate, umbrellas are a no-brainer for your residents. In addition to handing them out at move-in, consider also keeping loaner umbrellas in the lobby that residents can borrow on their way out. This will help them promote your community on those dreary days while also keeping themselves dry for a win-win solution. 

Instead of the classic black umbrella with white branding, think outside the box. Create a bold graphic treatment to the umbrella for a more eye-catching alternative. You can also opt for a clear plastic bubble umbrella that delivers maximum protection from the elements and a blank slate for you to showcase your logo and brand colors. 

Pet Products

If you have a pet-friendly community, your options for swag are nearly endless. From portable dog bowls to poop bag holders for leashes, pet accessories are a practical and unexpected way to engage with your residents. That way, they can spread the word about your community among other local pet owners and keep their four-legged friend happy and healthy at the same time.

 

Whether you opt to create one of these customized products for your resident or want to create something else, zipcode creative can help! We’re experts at bringing multifamily community branding to life online and in the real world. Whatever swag you dream up, we can make it a reality.

Staging Apartments for Spring Tours

When staging model units and common areas for spring apartment tours, everyone loves a good comeback story—so dust off the doldrums of winter, and bring on the spring cleaning and spring flowers to bring out the spring in your step. Keep things bright and cheery and the feeling will bubble over to affect your prospective residents.

Springtime is an important time to sign up new residents after the winter lull. This is particularly true if you live in a college town, and residents are starting to leave after their semester and lease is over. To make this season a success, make sure your model unit will fit the bill for your spring tours.

Staging with “Clean” in Mind

Clean is In
Skip the clutter for your spring apartment staging. Keep it minimal, clean, and cheery, and most of all: make sure the apartment is spotless and sparkling. This will keep your possible residents focused on what they need to be: the amenities, the spaces, and the way their own things will look in the space. 

Welcome with Style
Don’t forget the entry. Keep it clean, organized, and welcoming. If you can find a very light, natural fragrance, that can help a place feel clean and homey, as well. A green laurel wreath or a welcome mat and even a sweet little potted plant next to the door can turn drab into fab (and a simple tour into a signed lease).

Staging with Spring Flowers

These Are For You
Spring brings lots of florals to mind. You don’t need to go overboard with this one, but you can definitely have some fresh cut (bright!) flowers in a vase in the kitchen or on a sparsely-set kitchen or dining table. Choose flowers that won’t be too fragrant when your residents walk in. We’d recommend staying away from Oriental or Stargazer Lilies, but looking instead to Daffodils if available. Be sure to cut the stems and replace the water regularly to keep them looking fresh. Wondering about other options? Check this list for flowers that could work for your staging and are low-allergen or hypoallergenic.


Greenery=Life
If you can’t get fresh cut flowers, place some low-maintenance potted plants (or succulents) throughout the space to signify new life and greenery. Yes, April showers bring May flowers, and spring staging brings the outside in. If you’re able to pot a small herb garden in the kitchen, that will be a nice touch for any amateur chefs who have developed a taste for fresh flavors.

Pro-tip: Improve resident retention with an inexpensive gift: Find a small potted plant, such as a mini succulent or cactus, and put a little tag on it: “Have a spike-tacular spring!” for your new or renewing residents.

Staging with Color and Contrast

Happy Accents
Staging for spring definitely calls for color. Keep most of your apartment simple and neutral, and figure out what bright, happy colors could work well in your apartment: mustard yellow? Light blue? Verdant green? If it works, find an accent color within your branding, and bring it into the model unit to help the prospective resident have a fully immersive experience with your apartment community.

I Sense a Theme
As far as contrast goes, spread your colors out throughout the apartment so that they pop where they need to (so, don’t just put in some colorful throw pillows)! Find a space in each room that you can carry the theme with color. It doesn’t have to be the same, but it should feel related. It will give a better sense of “home” to anyone touring the unit.


Staging for Spring Dinner Parties

Host With the Most
The (big) holidays are over, and now it may be the time that your residents want to start hosting regular dinner parties. Set the table with wine glasses, simple plates and nice placemats (in your favorite spring-y color) to show how easy it will be to host in this new space. Make sure the living area also has some guest-friendly amenities, like a cocktail ottoman outfitted with a tray to hold happy hour beverages or a big bowl of popcorn for movie night. It’s certainly fun to go out, but it’s also a ton of fun to stay in with friends for a board game.

Spring Staging for Your Audience

Show it Off
Only you know who your desired (and current) residents are or should be. Think about the apartment from their perspective and be sure to address any pain points you have with your current residents, and fix it up for the tour, or be prepared to address them head-on during the tour. If you have a lot of students that live in your apartment community, stage a small desk area. If you’re focused on senior living, show off the spaces they can work on their hobbies, like quilting, scrapbooking, or even bird watching from the windows or deck.

Spring is a season we can all enjoy to the fullest—especially if we have a wonderful place to live. Show off your units with spring staging that will convince your prospective residents that this is the place where they can finally bloom.

Digital Marketing Mistakes in Multifamily Housing and How to Avoid Them

The multifamily market is competitive. If your metrics just aren’t cutting it, it might be time to start looking for answers—and evaluating your marketing strategy for common digital marketing mistakes is a good place to start. 

While marketing may seem like a small detail compared to day-to-day operations and maintaining resident happiness, it’s actually an integral component of keeping things running smoothly in your community. Marketing attracts prospective residents, helps to increase resident retention, and increases your brand recognition in the broader community for a plethora of invaluable benefits. But if you already know the importance of marketing and aren’t seeing the payoff, you could be falling victim to a few common pitfalls.

Learn more about the biggest digital marketing mistakes multifamily communities are making with their digital marketing efforts and how you can avoid them for more effective strategies.

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Not Prioritizing Branding & Design 

While your logo, website, and brand colors may seem like a small detail, it’s actually a factor that makes a big impact. Your branding should appear on every piece of marketing material you create, from flyers to direct mail postcards to your social media profiles. It’s an effective way for you to increase your brand awareness, drive recognition, and start to build a relationship with your current and prospective residents.

Instead of using a generic design, consider creating a logo and community branding that is influenced by your community’s design aesthetic. If you have a sleek and modern space, your logo should match. If your community is bright and colorful, on the other hand, consider branding that is more playful and fun. No matter which approach you choose, you should be consistent with using it across all of your marketing from emails to social media to your website to ensure a cohesive, professional, and polished look that will instantly set you apart from your competitors.

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Not Creating a Strong Digital Presence 

While the multifamily industry can sometimes be viewed as “old-school,” it’s important for communities to stay on top of their digital presence to attract renters. Nearly half of all renters are millennials and nearly 30% are of Gen Z. These digitally native groups were raised with the internet, smartphones, and social media at their fingertips. As a result, their natural inclination is to start their search for everything—including their next home—online. 

From apartment listing services like Apartments.com to Instagram and TikTok profiles, crafting a strong and recognizable point of view for your community across digital channels is pivotal to attracting prospective residents—but simply creating profiles isn’t enough. Sharing unique content regularly across these different marketing channels shows everything that your community has to offer. Engaging videos, social media series that you post regularly every week, and well-designed websites are all can’t-miss elements of a comprehensive and effective marketing strategy. Don’t undervalue the impact they can make on your lease-up rates and resident retention.

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Targeting the Wrong Audience

The digital world is vast. But just because someone is a user on Instagram or visited your website, it doesn’t necessarily mean that they’re the right person to target as a prospective resident. Defining your ideal audience is one of the first steps you should take to create a well-rounded and effective marketing strategy.

No matter how amazing your marketing is, if you’re targeting the wrong audience, you’ll never be effective. If your community is filled with young, single renters, for example, but your marketing efforts are targeting families, you’ll likely not be able to see the results you’re looking for.

Defining your target audience includes identifying demographic information like age, gender, and income, but also their psychographics, like their values, priorities, and hobbies. To get started, take a look at your existing residents and the apartment’s location. There’s a good chance that patterns will start to stand out. Maybe your community is filled with young professionals climbing the corporate ladder of companies headquartered nearby. Maybe it’s popular among empty-nesters or retirees. Whatever the case, create an avatar of the people that you’re trying to reach with your marketing efforts so you can better define what success looks like.

 

Using the Wrong Channels to Communicate

Once you’ve defined the right audience, it’s time to also evaluate which marketing channels you’re using. Younger demographics tend to gravitate toward social media like TikTok and Instagram, while older audiences use channels like Facebook. Email marketing is a great tool you can use to reach a wide range of audiences, always consider tailoring your messaging to the things your audience cares about. 

If you have a lot of corporate employees, a communal workspace like a business center could be a key selling point. For young families, on the other hand, an outdoor playground would be a must-have amenity for prospects. Think strategically about who you’re talking to, how to reach them, and exactly what to say to make your marketing more effective and to avoid any major digital marketing mistakes. 

If you’re ready to level up and want to avoid the common pitfalls that multifamily communities make with their marketing, it could be time to enlist the experts. At zipcode creative, we’ve worked with communities all over the country to totally transform their branding approach.

Get in touch today to learn more! 

Areum social graphic is ©Fairfield Residential  |  Work executed by Stacey Feeney, owner of zipcode creative, while under creative direction and employment at Fairfield Residential.

Handling Negative Comments on Social Media

Handling negative comments on social media is as important for managing your online reputation as social media is key in marketing your apartment community. Social media is great for leveraging leasing incentives, showcasing available units, or promoting upcoming events. But how and when to respond to mean, rude, or upset comments is an even more important factor. Respond too quickly to a disgruntled commenter and you risk not having enough information or too much emotion. Respond too slowly and your social media audience will critique you for being—you guessed it—unresponsive. Social media is a great tool, but sometimes good things can go bad. Keep things on the sunny side with a few extra tips.

Let’s go over the right steps to take when handling negative comments on social media:

Before Handling Negative Comments

It’s Not Fight or Flight

Take a deep breath and calm your nervous system.

Know Your Audience

Is this person a resident, applicant, or not attached to the community? Know where they are in the “funnel” so you can address the problems in the right way. 

If it’s an internet troll (someone who is there to just disrupt your business and harass your company) take the appropriate steps. Report or flag the comment and block the account for bullying/harassment. Let the social media “police” take it from there.

Don’t Take it Personally

You represent a brand, not your person, on this social media account

Do Your Research

Ask your colleagues or manager if this problem has come up before. How has it been addressed? Quickly email your coworkers to find out if it’s been addressed or is in the process of being addressed so you can give those details (or some of those details) to the commenter.

 

While Handling Negative Comments

Apologize

That’s if you’re aware you did something wrong. Or if they’re upset. Sometimes a simple “I’m sorry this happened” can diffuse the situation and make the commenter feel heard.

 

Customer Service to the Rescue

Just responding through a comment shows off your best customer service through visibility and kindness. When you are responding, lay out the steps you’ll take to address it, even if it’s a simple: “I’m going to check in with our manager to make sure this never happens again.”

 

Get in Touch

Give the commenter a contact method off of social media: a phone number or email so they can take steps to contact you a different way. Be expecting that call or email so you can respond immediately and continue to fix the problem.

 

Ask Questions

Saying “when did this happen?” can be helpful in determining whether it needs to be fixed right away, is a recurring problem, or has just come to light recently. This will help you address the problem appropriately. It also gives the commenter the idea (which should be correct) that you’re actively working to find a solution.

 

Freebies

If the situation calls for it, give the dog a bone—offer a rent credit or a free gift by way of apology. For example, you can give the resident a gift card to a local coffee shop, and tell them that the coffee is on you! If an apology + $5 or $10 can keep a resident happy, do it.

After Handling Negative Comments

Follow Up if Necessary

Check back in with the commenter via DM, or if you have their contact info, take the opportunity to follow up within a week or two of the resolution

 

Investigate

Put your detective glasses on. Look into the root of the issue that was brought up so it won’t be a recurring problem.

 

Move On

Know that once you’ve done your best, there’s nothing more you can do. Hopefully all these steps helped resolve the issue, but sleep easy knowing that some people can’t be pleased!

 

Extra Tips on Social Media Reputation Management

If you’re struggling on social (even beyond negative comments), use zipcode to help you craft your feed to keep it light and breezy, with plenty of lead generation. Social graphics and social posts are our jam. If you’re not on social media, jump in! (It’s not as scary as we made it sound.) It’s actually a lot of cute animals and entertaining videos–speaking of which, check out our blog on creating videos that will be a hit on your social media.

Still need a few extra tips on social media reputation management? We got you.

Have responses in your notes section, with some customizable areas. Double check that everything is correct before you post it. This can help you have “go to” phrases that will make your response faster, while giving you a semi-scripted way to address the problem (removing emotion a bit, is always helpful–while still allowing some empathy to come through.)

Post regularly. Don’t be an absentee social media account. This will keep your audience coming back to see what else may be going on–whether it’s a resident event or a new lease incentive. If you’re having trouble figuring out what to post, create a social calendar, and schedule it out using graphics or photos straight from zipcode creative!